Hi classmates,
today I am going to talk about the creepiest movie I have ever seen. Last year I was
with my friends after class, one friend suggested going to the cinema because
it was a Wednesday I think and the ticket for the cinema it was cheaper than
the rest of de days of the week… I said;
yes, let’s go it’s so fun.
We decided to see “The
Conjuring”, an American horror film about a family who moves into a farmhouse. They are faced with a series of paranormal events
that they can explain and they contact two investigators of paranormal issues
to solve their problems. The paranormal investigators were very particular, they have a lot of haunted things in THEIR HOUSE! They are nuts…
I was terrified
since the begin of the movie, I HATE paranormal horror films; I am such a baby
for these things. My friends made fun of
me because I cover my eyes with my hands and screams every time.
I refused to go
to see another horror movie. Bye
I really like going to the cinema with you. Besides, you have the greatest taste to choose what to see.
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Nice Carla!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, pls change the layout of your blog to English. This is done at Settings.
Some important comments:
The verb "suggest" has this pattern:
REMEMBER:
1. Suggest that someone do something
2. Suggest doing something
3. Suggest something
So, "One frind suggested that we go to the cinema" or "one friend suggested going to the cinema"
Also about the verb "decide". It is always followed by To + base form of the verb. "We decided to see.."
Don´t forget Subject / Verb agreement:
The investigators WERE very peculiar? "They HAVE a lot of haunted things in their house..."
Finally, if you are talking about an event in the past, shouldn´t the verbs reflect that?
"... My friends made fun of me because I cover my eyes with my hands and screams every time"
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